The singer sounds like an angry 15yr old at some parts, and I can't handle the whiny voice. That, and the "deep screams" sounds like he's trying way to f**king hard.
Instrument wise it's decent, but nothing great...nothing really sets you apart from the other barrage of screamo bands up and coming.
But on a totally different rant,
CUT YOUR f**king HAIR FOR CHRISTSAKES. Be f**king original, somebody please. It seems like everyone does it for the image, and the s**t is played way the f**k out. If your a dirty f**king screamo band, then why the f**k does your shower have products that make it look like an aisle at Bed Bath and Beyond? (Not directly pointed to you or your band, but com'n.)
Example -
Henry Rollins - FAG
Henry Rollins - BAMF
Another Example
and
If I had means to photoshop right now, you would have NO IDEA Bieber was in that picture...
/rant
But anyway, it sounds like it has real potential. Find something that makes people WANT to hear you guys, and not something they can hear by simply youtube'ing "Screamo"
And for the record, I'm definitely a fan of the sound. ABRB, Suicide Silence, ect ect.