visual info graphic -- opinions?

[zachkelly]

This is part of my assignment for one of my design classes

I had to choose a hand tool, or procedure and depict it without using any words and exactly ten steps as simply as possible, as if it was a dumb person looking at it. haha It had to be one color (black and white)
I was required to do a bunch of sketches.. ugh.

The final piece was done in Illustrator. Please enlarge it if its small, and im sorry if it stretched the page out!

The final printed was on 5x5 cards backed by foamcore.

soo.. I figured id share it since i used a civic as my model hahaha
what do you think?

 

[joe7987]

Nice man. That's pretty cool.

 

[253eg]

Car is not low enough in pic and lacking 2x4

 

[Deezy]

Nice Job!

 

[Mr. Jollypants]

Its good except for the arrows, what are the arrows for?

 

[s_crowley 17]

You'll get a good grade

 

[bizoneoeh]

you need a complete restart. it's horrible!

 

[zachkelly]

Thanks..

Its good except for the arrows, what are the arrows for?

Thats a part I had a problem with. Theyre supposed to indicate which way to turn the wrench but its not working well since its at the handle. I Changed them to white and put them on the car, but I wasnt sure. I'll work on it haha. The vertical arrows are obvious.. I think.

you need a complete restart. it's horrible!

wait.. seriously?

 

[bizoneoeh]

wait.. seriously?

no, I was just f**king around sorry





I hate how your image breaks the thread tho.

 

[Mr. Jollypants]

Thats a part I had a problem with. Theyre supposed to indicate which way to turn the wrench but its not working well since its at the handle. I Changed them to white and put them on the car, but I wasnt sure. I'll work on it haha. The vertical arrows are obvious.. I think.

You could try adding lines to the lug wrench indicating which way it's going, and add the arrow on top where it goes with the lug nut to also help indicate which way to turn it.